Suppressed
Suppressed
She drifted there
Buoyantly alone
The water gently caressing the known
Carrying her down the suppressed river
Recollections of her life made her shiver
She arose from her reverie,
Her backside wet from dismay
Her river of tears on display
She walked admirably across the water
Cleansing her feet
Her silk gown billowed tenderly
Upon her skin
Blowing delicately in the winds,
The winds composed
From the melodies of her sighs
The ‘oh me’ ‘oh my’s’
And the why’s?
And the lies…..
That she muttered,
Uttered on her murkiest days
But now she padded upon the waters of her past
Arose from the waters at long last
With her white silken gown
Forever wet
To remind her
Lest she ever forget
©Jennifer David 2014
“The winds composed
From the melodies of her sighs
The ‘oh me’ ‘oh my’s’
And the why’s?
And the lies…..”
Lovelovelove those lines. Beautiful.
Thank you Laura! I appreciate it.
I love to rhyme and write curtly, I can’t seem to let go of it…but I am trying to expand myself a little more….
There is nothing wrong with rhyming…or curtness. 😀
beautifully written
Thank you.
Love your poem. This fan video for Bring Me The Horizon’s “Seen It All Before” pairs pretty much perfectly with it!
This is beautifully written! I love the way it flows.
Thank you. I am usually a little more lyrical but I am trying out new flows and styles.. 🙂
Absolutely beautiful. And I agree with Laura, loved those lines.
Thank you.
Beautifully written poem.
Thank you 🙂
very nice composition and good you have a pic to relate..thats a good appeal
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Sooooooo nice!
Thank you Charles. I appreciate your kind words 🙂
Wonderful! Very fluid and visual. Your are extremely talented
Thank you. I appreciate your too kind words!
Have a wonderful day.
I love your poem. 🙂
Thank you.
Beautifully sensual and yet restrained. Very intriguing piece.
Thank you.
so beautiful!!!
Thank you
what charming imagery, thanks.