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She tried to live by the rules
Implement her Dr. taught tools
But it was a slippery slope
With only words as her rope
Observers filled with hope
But she liked her wild side
She thrived off the crazy ride
Got high when her worlds would collide
The words she spoke
To live by the rules
The truth of herself she denied
©Jennifer David 2014
Amazing poem, I loved the syncopation and cosmic energy throughout. Well done!
Thank you very much Jeff. I appreciate you taking a moment to let me know what you thought of the poem.
Wonderfull rythm.. so hard to live by rules set down by others…
Wonderful, Jennifer. Happy new year and many happy returns.
Thank you. To you as well.
First read and I’m taken by your muses! Glad I stopped by! 🙂 keep writing!
Thank you Aniket. I’m happy to have you.
I’m glad you enjoy my writing. 🙂
Such a magnificent poem!
What inspired you to write this incredible piece?
Happy New years! 2014.
I am back! and ready to blog again…I just posted a new poem. Check it out when you get a chance. 🙂
wonderful words and picture!
ok..i hate poetry..im very pragmatic..im a feral cat who has been freezing her ass off for two days..staying alive..i mean cant we just talk..i dont get poetry..totally lost on me..until this..really…….do you know me..do you live in wonderland..crap..im gonna follow..its not like i dont have enough to do..staying alive..nailing chipmunks..and now im going to read a canadians poetry..crap..thanks alot..lilly
Welcome to my Blog Lily the Cat whether you are number 5994 or 6000, I’m happy to have you!
crap..im 5994..should have held out for 6000..
Great prose, Jennifer! Something I can definitely relate to. Happy belated New Year; hope all is well 🙂
Thank you Joseph. Happy New Year to you as well…
I look forward to reading your newest posts!
🙂 As well I. Awesome!
I mean, reading your new posts, that is! lmao It’s been a long day
Love the words. Just started following you. I’m also a poet and would love to share some of my work with you.
Welcome to my blog!
I’ll head over to your blog now and give you a read.
Thank you !
Wow, I do not know much about this craft, but the words, the rhythm, the depth of play. Awesome! I felt excited as I read. If all you work is like this I think I will continue reading. Thank you!
Glad to hear that you enjoyed and appreciated what I was trying to get across with my poetry.
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